In Brief:
Bone #3 picks up the story and the excitement again that was left in Bone # 1. We have some exciting plot twists and strong subplots that develop the characters of Thorn and Gran'ma Ben. There are also a few laugh out loud moments.
Areas of Contention:
-Showy pictures of Thorn: Her dress is sometimes has trouble covering her completely, at the beginning too low at the top, later, so short that it is more of a shirt. Fone Bone tries to write her a love poem and wants to find something to rhyme with "smooth brown thighs."
-Scenes in the bar: depictions of drinking, no characters get drunk.
-Inappropriate Language: Lucius says "You two better not crap around like this th' whole way to Barrelhaven"
Bone #3 picks up the story and the excitement again that was left in Bone # 1. We have some exciting plot twists and strong subplots that develop the characters of Thorn and Gran'ma Ben. There are also a few laugh out loud moments.
Areas of Contention:
-Showy pictures of Thorn: Her dress is sometimes has trouble covering her completely, at the beginning too low at the top, later, so short that it is more of a shirt. Fone Bone tries to write her a love poem and wants to find something to rhyme with "smooth brown thighs."
-Scenes in the bar: depictions of drinking, no characters get drunk.
-Inappropriate Language: Lucius says "You two better not crap around like this th' whole way to Barrelhaven"
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